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- It's great that you went into detail about the elements in your film (location/ characters etc) but make sure you stay on topic with how these conventions CHALLENGED or CONFORMED to the usual thriller conventions.
- you used other thriller conventions like iconography (gun/ blood), tension building music, sound effect, dark lighting at places, isolated places without people present etc, where is mention of all the other conventions?
representation:
- I feel like this would have been a good place to talk more in depth about society's representation of love and romance and what messages your film was giving the audience in relation to this.
- the other area of representation that you could have used to talk about was the gender one. How does the media usually portray men and women. How have you chosen to portray each gender? Why ? What messages does this send to the viewer?
QUESTION 2
- Interesting rationale behind the choice of narrative and characterisation.
- What other elements did you have in the film that would draw the audience in and cause them to be engrossed in the story and your film? (music that built tension? characters who are relatable? technical elements like mine-en-scene (fake blood/ gun/ placement of characters in the frame) that add to mystery and intrigue and ultimately tension?)
- this answer needed more expansion and some more thought to be a fuller answer.
QUESTION 3
- Great commentary on the technical processes that you went through to get your finished product.
- I like the learning moments you recorded for lighting issues, conforming to the 180' rule and casting.
- good job learning from PT 1 mistakes
- that was a good idea to take an extra battery pack!
QUESTION 4
- good research done to upscale for after effects and other technical aspects, great to see you're taking initiative to watch tutorials and learn
Overall a satisfactory CCR showing the learning moments and what you intend to do differently next time as well as what you learnt from PT 1 that you changed for PT 2. I would still like to see a bit more detail for each question and I know with weekly updates to your Foundation Portfolio CCR, you will have more depth in your notes as you work your way through your project and not leave it till afterwards to try remember it all.
Overall Score:15/ 20