Concept:
TITLE: Why? - Establishes one of the main aims of why Dylan is coming back(the most important one)
Target audience: Mature audience 15+
Institutional/Genre Conventions:
*Characters: Olivia(Isabelle)- Wife of Dylan, killed him now has to face consequences for him coming back
Dylan(James)- Husband of Olivia, was not killed by Olivia despite her attempt, he's come back to ruin Olivia's life and to find out why she did what she did
Mysterious figure- con-conspirator to Dylans attempted murder, gets killed by Dylan and has his phone used to establish meeting time with Olivia
*Setting/Time:- Olivia and Dylan's house(Maryann's house)- Changed later to Max's house
- Park(flashback)
-Street(chase sequence)
*Props/Costumes: *rings
*couple photo and frame
*fake blood (paper)
*paper bag/envelope
*gun decorated
*hoodie
*fake scar
*Key Genre Elements: *Chase sequence
*Driven and a recurring reason for going a bit psychologically unstable
* The person you thought was dead is now coming back to haunt you with a vendetta (ring, photo and gun inside an envelope)
* Plot Twists
* Flashbacks'
* Lighting(twist convention)
*Filming/Editing Choices: *Quick cuts/ long drawn out scenes- quick cuts creates tension heightens heartbeat, long drawn out scenes causes heightened inquisitivity and thus we want to know more but the movie purposely makes us wait for it and thus when it happens it would catch people off-guard
*Bright light/dim light- bright light creates the effect of making it relatable if it's in the day it will be bright which emphasises the relatability and realism. Dim light creates the effect of tension as we see very little of what goes on which puts an emphasis on the scary side of a thriller
*Sound: I will most likely use a mixture of high pitch and low bass music in order to get the right mix of the 2 extremes which I think is highly important for the action and psychological thriller sub-genre
PLOT SYNOPSIS:
Olivia has killed her husband Dylan with the reasons for doing so unclear. We start the film of her contemplating a picture with both her and Dylan together with their signatures LIV&Dylan
She goes to bed, leaving the picture on her bedside table. The next morning, she wakes up and prepares for her day, she does not realise that the picture in the frame is missing, however, before she leaves the house she notices that her rug had been moved slightly, she ignores it. When she returns home, she finds a note with WHY? LIV written in blood.
She freaks out and goes to her bedroom to start crying. She then notices the picture missing and starts to link everything together, the rug, the note and the missing picture. In a panic, she calls a mysterious person and tells he/her whats going on, however, that person had been killed by Dylan who was now on the other end of the phone and sets up a meeting place.
At the meeting place, they establish eye contact and a chase scene breaks out, Dylan is too fast and runs away, leaving behind an envelope with the picture with liv's face scratched out his wedding ring and the gun she used to "kill" him with, Liv starts laughing cynically.
We then go to a flashback, of liv attempting to kill Dylan and then fleeing from the scene, throwing the handgun into the bushes, but Dylan's hand moved slightly once liv cut out of frame.
CHARACTERS:
Olivia/Liv: Olivia is the main character in this story, she had attempted to kill her husband Dylan and now has to deal with the fact that that he was back and is coming for her. Her character is constantly shrouded in mystery as we never get to know why she did it, we get links leading her to a person that may have aided her and the letter WHY is never answered.
Dylan: Olivia's deceased husband, he is back for answers as to why Olivia had tried to kill him. We rarely see his face and when we do we see it only for a scene where they share a quick glance before it erupts in a chase. He too is shrouded in mystery as we don't know his true intentions.
PRACTICALITIES OF FILMING/CONTENT:
*Our idea is realistic in the fact that despite this not being a very probable scenario in real life, is realistic in the fact that compared to other films this has a more realistic feel where the characters are ordinary but do have a dark side.
*Someone could trip and falls during the chase sequence
*We have to film at a park but it's for public use and there usually isn't a lot of people there at 4 in the afternoon
* Check Equipment list
* a difficult shot to get would be the pov shot of Olivia shooting Dylan and the chase sequence
A Treatment for Why?
Prepared by Vernnon Ding
28-3-18
The film has to be a maximum of 2 minutes long and has to be focused on a thriller subgenre. We decided that we were going to go with an action and psychological thriller with certain twists that make it unique and interesting.
We decided to set the film's locations in easily accessible locations that were easy to film in and that it would match our themes. We decided to film at Max's house due to its location being near a park and was a generally quiet place compared to our first option being a house next to a street that had cars driving up it constantly and thus would have provided a lot of unnecessary background noise that would have been an extra hindrance to the editing process.
Title-> Why?
We decided to give our film the title Why? as it represents the question that Dylan is asking Olivia that reoccurs throughout the film, “why did you try to kill me”. This question in itself is the driving force behind Dylan’s actions throughout the film but the question itself despite being asked constantly, is never answered and thus almost leaves behind in its wake a paradox.
Characters:
Olivia (Isabelle): For our main character of the film, we decided that we were going to twist the representations of a female in films, as we made Olivia and rival to Dylan, our male lead. Her character is unique due to fact that we tried to mould her character so that the audience would have a conflicting time in deciding whether to feel compassion for the character or completely shun her due to her act of killing Dylan. Throughout the film, she is tracked down and “haunted” by Dylan whom she believes she has killed and should be dead. We follow her progress of slowly realising that he has come back due to the hints that he has left throughout the film. In the end, the audience gets to witness Olivia undergo the beginning symptoms of losing her sanity, proven by her cynical laugh at the end of the film.
Dylan (Jackson): Dylan, is our male character that just like Olivia, gives the audience a feeling of uncertainty, as we do not know whether he is a villain or is only acting like this for revenge. Throughout the film, we do not follow his character but we do get evidence of his actions through the missing ring, the carpet being moved and the note. In the end, he slips away and creates a cliff-hanger not just for us but for Olivia as we are uncertain what he would do next.
Ideology:
· The message of our film is that actions have consequences. We see Olivia being haunted by her past mistake of killing Dylan and we see the effects it has on her, slowly driving her insane.
· We decided to include representations of, Gender roles and love and romance.
· We decided to challenge the representation of love and romance as we see a twisted version of this, where a wife has killed her husband and is feeling remorseful but also afraid. Gender roles are also challenged, as we decided to make the wife the murderer instead of conforming and picking the male. This twist gives an additional effect and could potentially draw the audience in more as they would have seen a female being the “main antagonist” and would be a change from the typical male villain.
Mood and Tone:
The overall mood of this film is that of sadness. This is backed up by the tone of regret and remorse.
Camera shots:
The most common shot in our film is arguably the over the shoulder shot. This helps involve the audience and it makes them feel like they are really there in the midst of the film and is overall intended to increase the engrossment of the audience. It also gives off a personal feel and thus would cause the audiences to form a relationship with the characters whether it is hate or empathy.
Symbolism:
· Ring: We open with Olivia playing with her ring and it goes missing but shows up again with Dylan’s ring, symbolising Dylan letting go of their marriage and their only connection we know of.
· Gun: The gun that Olivia uses to shoot Dylan shows up again in the envelope and symbolises a return of the tool that caused this which Olivia had attempted to discard. This fully symbolises the fact that the past has really come back.
· Note: The note appears twice, once when its left at the door and again in the envelope this shows Dylan’s audacity to return to the house thrice, once to take the ring, once to leave the note and the final time being to retrieve the note.


